Review: Since You've Been Gone by Mary Jennifer Payne

I have received an advance e-edition of this book from NetGalley in exchange for my honest review of it.

Kids get scared when they lose their moms for a minute, so your mother disappearing in London must be horrifying. This is the set-up for Mary Jennifer Payne’s suspenseful and tragic new novel Since You’ve Been Gone.

Fifteen-year-old Edie is used to being on the run with her mom, but she is especially heartbroken when she finds out that they are moving to her mother’s native hometown of London from Edie’s native Toronto. Not only must she start again at a new high school, every teen’s worst nightmare, but she must also do so in a place where no one speaks or dresses like she is used to. Then it gets worse, and when Edie’s mom doesn’t come home she is sent on a journey across London to discover the truth for better or for worse.

Payne’s depiction of London was phenomenal. My favorite kinds of settings are those that seem to come alive off the page, almost becoming their own character. Here, the reader discovers London through Edie’s eyes, from the slummy section of South London where she lives to the luxurious section north of the River Thames. Payne’s description doesn’t read like a tourist manual of the top ten sites to see in London like some other books. Instead, it reads like a chaotic mess that is intimidating and fascinating at the same time to a newcomer.

However, the same could not be said of the scenes of the book that take place in Edie’s high school, which were to be completely honest a little lackluster. The mean girls were stereotypical, the outcasts even more so.  The dynamics between the teachers and the students were the best part of those sections of the book, but only mildly so.

The best part of the book was the developing relationship between Jermaine and Edie. Payne managed to include a romantic subplot to the story that was like a prepubescent version of Sex in the City. Instead, their love for each other took time to develop, and was full of understanding and simplicity. That part was great.

The overall idea for the book is also worthy of praise. I only wish that the plot didn’t move so quickly so that it might have been even better. The timing of the book seemed to move way too quickly, and Edie’s father’s actions seemed completely unrealistic. I also didn’t really like how everything seemed to be tied up into a bow at the end of the book.  With everything that happened, I expected there to be more loose ends. I wasn’t left disappointed at the end exactly, just disappointed that this book wasn’t as excellent as it could have been. Still, it was a fun read and has several high points in addition to its lows.

3/5 stars